Feedback on two of my poems

These are very nice poems, I can see them being in a book and getting popular. The thoughts that must go into these, I can feel the emotion as if its mine.

You don't know how much that means to me, thank you a lot!

I actually took the last poem, and recited it to myself in my living room. It has alot of passion, especially the last few lines, and could cause alot of emotion, if said to the right person, with the right tone, and pauses ect. I like them.

I actually took the last poem, and recited it to myself in my living room. It has alot of passion, especially the last few lines, and could cause alot of emotion, if said to the right person, with the right tone, and pauses ect. I like them.

Thanks! I will end up posting a poem about my Dad that I haven't showed to no-one.

Thanks for the feedback!