Feedback on two of my poems

Just would like some feedback, don't be scared to hurt my feelings, any type of feedback is appreciated to help me improve.

Sometimes….

Sometimes we have a tendency to see things that aren’t meant to be seen
Sometimes things aren’t forever as they seem
Sometimes we want somebody to call our own
Especially when we’re alone
Sometimes people simply can’t understand
Why things get out of hand
Sometimes life isn’t fair
Especially once people simply don’t care
And typically it’s exhausting to say
Why things have to be this way.


For you….
I knew that love would come find me one day
But never did I know it’d be you who was headed my way
You caught me unexpectedly and took me by surprise
But you charmed me, the same way you do when I look into your eyes
“Where your treasure is, your heart will be also” is how the old saying goes
I may not have knowledge of what tomorrow may bring, for God is the only one who is aware
The one thing I am sure of is that you are my love, my one and only
A treasure in my heart that I want to devote my whole life too fully and completely.


I currently have another also but it's personal and has to do with my father's death. Please tell me how I can improve, etc. or what you think!