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What should it be about? I tend to rear away from using derogatory, and/or curse words in the making of the rap.

Make one that just makes people lift up off their seats and get them high off life. Talk about Life.

I'll create the rap, within the next few hours, and release it either later tonight, or tomorrow morning. We could do a collab, if you'd like, though, and share our work on the forum. :)