Need some feedback

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Junior Member

4 Years of Service

02-28-2014, 03:20 AM

Hello, I have started to write a story and would like some feedback, also a vote would be nice.

http://www.wattpad.com/40343263-the-blac...an-fiction

LeakSociety Owner

2 Weeks

03-04-2014, 02:09 AM

It's not bad at all. Could use a bit more direction, though.

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Senior Member

4 Years of Service

03-04-2014, 02:12 AM

Make sure you proof read before releasing or anything just so people dont bother you about grammatical errors.

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