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03-14-2014, 01:37 AM
Hopefully, years from now, I’ll look back at these poems with great pleasure and reminisce
On a childhood filled with excitement, wonder, and bliss.
During English class, I learned that even though it seems meek,
Putting pen to paper is what makes this class so unique.
You see writing is so fun; it’s almost a cathartic release.
I can write a paper and now a few poems with ease.
Strangely, the one thing that I thought was absurd had occurred!
Might put a few more poetry threads out, aswell as rap, if I get good feedback.
Kind Regards,
Raymond
On a childhood filled with excitement, wonder, and bliss.
During English class, I learned that even though it seems meek,
Putting pen to paper is what makes this class so unique.
You see writing is so fun; it’s almost a cathartic release.
I can write a paper and now a few poems with ease.
Strangely, the one thing that I thought was absurd had occurred!
Might put a few more poetry threads out, aswell as rap, if I get good feedback.
Kind Regards,
Raymond
03-14-2014, 02:33 AM
This is nice, I also can't wait for your rap. ;)
Can you give me feedback?
http://perkforum.com/showthread.php?tid=778
Can you give me feedback?
http://perkforum.com/showthread.php?tid=778
03-14-2014, 02:36 AM
Nice poem, I'm not really into rap.. but I'll definitely give yours a try.
03-14-2014, 02:38 AM
(03-14-2014, 02:33 AM)Intellectual Wrote: This is nice, I also can't wait for your rap. ;)
Can you give me feedback?
http://perkforum.com/showthread.php?tid=778
Think I should release a rap?
I'm fairly good at them, but believe everyone would like them, depending on if they like my poetry.
I'm fairly good at them, but believe everyone would like them, depending on if they like my poetry.
03-14-2014, 02:40 AM
Quote:Think I should release a rap?
I'm fairly good at them, but believe everyone would like them, depending on if they like my poetry.
Go for it! I'm down to listen and I guess I can release a few of mine.
03-14-2014, 02:45 AM
(03-14-2014, 02:40 AM)Intellectual Wrote:Quote:Think I should release a rap?
I'm fairly good at them, but believe everyone would like them, depending on if they like my poetry.
Go for it! I'm down to listen and I guess I can release a few of mine.
(03-14-2014, 02:36 AM)Dexus Wrote: Nice poem, I'm not really into rap.. but I'll definitely give yours a try.
What should it be about? I tend to rear away from using derogatory, and/or curse words in the making of the rap.
03-14-2014, 02:47 AM
(03-14-2014, 02:45 AM)Man Wrote:(03-14-2014, 02:40 AM)Intellectual Wrote: Go for it! I'm down to listen and I guess I can release a few of mine.
(03-14-2014, 02:36 AM)Dexus Wrote: Nice poem, I'm not really into rap.. but I'll definitely give yours a try.
What should it be about? I tend to rear away from using derogatory, and/or curse words in the making of the rap.
Make one that just makes people lift up off their seats and get them high off life. Talk about Life.
03-14-2014, 02:49 AM
(03-14-2014, 02:47 AM)Intellectual Wrote:(03-14-2014, 02:45 AM)Man Wrote:What should it be about? I tend to rear away from using derogatory, and/or curse words in the making of the rap.
Make one that just makes people lift up off their seats and get them high off life. Talk about Life.
I'll create the rap, within the next few hours, and release it either later tonight, or tomorrow morning. We could do a collab, if you'd like, though, and share our work on the forum. :)
03-14-2014, 03:34 AM
(03-14-2014, 01:37 AM)Man Wrote:Hopefully, years from now, I’ll look back at these poems with great pleasure and reminisce
On a childhood filled with excitement, wonder, and bliss.
During English class, I learned that even though it seems meek,
Putting pen to paper is what makes this class so unique.
You see writing is so fun; it’s almost a cathartic release.
I can write a paper and now a few poems with ease.
Strangely, the one thing that I thought was absurd had occurred!
Might put a few more poetry threads out, aswell as rap, if I get good feedback.
Kind Regards,
Raymond
chicka chicka slim shaddyyyyyy
03-14-2014, 03:38 AM
(03-14-2014, 03:34 AM)Vineyard Vines Wrote:(03-14-2014, 01:37 AM)Man Wrote:Hopefully, years from now, I’ll look back at these poems with great pleasure and reminisce
On a childhood filled with excitement, wonder, and bliss.
During English class, I learned that even though it seems meek,
Putting pen to paper is what makes this class so unique.
You see writing is so fun; it’s almost a cathartic release.
I can write a paper and now a few poems with ease.
Strangely, the one thing that I thought was absurd had occurred!
Might put a few more poetry threads out, aswell as rap, if I get good feedback.
Kind Regards,
Raymond
chicka chicka slim shaddyyyyyy
I have a feeling you'll highly enjoy the rap I create. Sadly, I am keen to cursing ect. Though that is highly unprofessional. Here on Perkforum, I strive to professional. Therefore, it'll be a clean rap about my life. Probably made by vocaroo. Depending on how I am feeling.